In the early morning, it was still raining, and sometimes there were also strong winds blowing, which made the rolling gate of the opposite house sound and sound. I originally wanted to go back to my hometown during the holiday on Saturday. The rain seemed to make me lose face, so I dismissed the idea of going home. After breakfast, I walked into the dormitory and sat in front of the table with a bench to correct the students’ compositions. Correcting compositions is an important part of Chinese teaching and a very fine work. A teacher once said like this: he likes to take several Chinese classes and is unwilling to correct a composition. This shows that it is very hard to change the composition. Composition is a window of students’ hearts. It is difficult to understand a student’s inner world if students’ compositions are not corrected properly. As for correcting primary school students’ compositions, I often start from the following aspects to deepen my understanding of students’ inner world. I. Content modification (1) whether the statement is smooth and fluent. (2) whether the content conforms to the meaning of the question. (3) whether the material properly represents the center. (4) whether the center is clear and centralized. (5) whether the viewpoint is correct and clear. II. Format modification (1) whether the level is clear. (2) whether the details are appropriate. (3) whether the use of Chinese characters and punctuation marks is correct. (4) whether the application format is complete and correct. (5) to modify the method, methods such as adding, deleting, adjusting and changing can be adopted, and corresponding modification symbols should be used for the composition in the examination room to ensure that the paper surface is clean and tidy. It takes a lot of time and energy to correct a composition in this way. Generally, it takes nearly 30 minutes to correct a composition, and I have been busy for a long time without correcting several compositions. Because of the rain, my son didn’t go out to play today. He urged me to cook dinner at 4: 30. I answered several times: Let’s have dinner after finishing these compositions, I am deeply attracted by students’ compositions. My son ran to me to see me correcting students’ compositions, and then he walked away unconsciously. I finally forgot to cook dinner. My son couldn’t bear it. I learned to cook dinner by myself. After the dinner was cooked, my son asked me to have dinner several times, but I didn’t go. He was a little angry and went to work on his homework after having dinner. This student’s composition is based on gratitude. When I just started to assign this topic, I was afraid that my classmates couldn’t grasp the content of this aspect, so I wanted to rewrite the content of other aspects. However, my classmates insisted that I wouldn’t change it, and they all wanted to have a try, I agreed with their request. In the process of correcting, I found that the students’ composition was really good, which was really precious for rural children. Now I extract the composition of the two classmates, and let it be treasured in my memory forever as a lovely gift. (Ii) grateful parents author: Qiu Dong (pseudonym) Speaking of gratitude, I still don’t know who I am grateful to. There are so many people around me who help me, care for me and love me, inspire me… which one is not worthy of my gratitude? I thought hard, ah… these two people are what I should be most grateful to, that is my father and mother. From the moment I was born, they devoted all their love to me. Although they could not bring me a splendid life, they gave me an eternal life. They hold up a clear sky of love for me with love. When I am depressed, depressed and crying, I can enjoy the warmth of love in my parents’ harbor. I remember once when I was having dinner with my father and mother, suddenly my stomach was painful. My father was very anxious. He put down the bowl and chopsticks in his hand and ran to the township hospital with my back. My mother locked the door at the back and ran to the township hospital immediately. When I arrived at the hospital, my father went to the infirmary to ask a doctor to see me. After checking, smelling, asking, and cutting, the doctor said that there was no big deal. Stomach pain was caused by too much food, and eating some snack tablets would be good. Hearing what the doctor said, the hanging stone in their hearts suddenly fell down, and a smile flashed between their eyebrows. I was safe in a few days after my parents took care of me. Another time, my whole body was wet when I played with several children. My father was not at home that day, and only my mother was at home. I didn’t dare to tell my mother when I went home. I sneaked into the house and changed my clothes and trousers, but later my mother knew it. I had a high fever in the middle of the night. My mother went to Murakami alone with a flashlight and asked a doctor to see me. But God played tricks on people. The village doctor was not at home that night. My mother had to go to the township hospital four or five miles away from home alone to ask a doctor to see me. After the doctor examined me, she said that she would take intravenous drip, and my mother nodded. The doctor went home after intravenous drip. However, my mother kept waiting in front of my bed. When I woke up, I found that my mother fell asleep on the head of the bed. At this time, I was tearful and didn’t know what to say to my mother. Parents’ love is as warm as spring; As warm as summer; As refreshing as autumn; As pure as winter. Let’s learn to be grateful! If today is the last day of my life, the first thing we should do is to repay my parents who raised me! The kindness of dripping water should be reported to the spring. What’s more, what parents pay for us is not only a drop of water, But a vast ocean. Although gratitude is a behavior verb, it needs not only actions, but also sincerity. In short, gratitude is gratitude, from the heart. Only when we learn to be grateful can our hearts become pure. (3) grateful author: Xiong Xuefang (pseudonym) gratitude is a virtue and a necessary accomplishment for a person. Each of us should have a grateful heart. I have seen such a story in an extra-curricular book: Once upon a time, a woman’s family was not in the world, leaving her alone, and her family was very poor. Once she passed the street and saw a little boy in shabby clothes sitting there feebly. She walked over and asked: what are you doing here? Where are your parents? Why didn’t they pick you up? The little boy shed dry tears and said feebly: both my parents have passed away. I haven’t got a piece of bread to eat since I came here from home for several days, but a glass of water to drink. The woman said. Therefore, the kind woman handed the last piece of bread in her bag to the little boy, but she walked with an empty belly. The woman fainted on the ground after walking for a while. People in the street immediately took the woman to the hospital, and the woman was saved. Later, the little boy met a big businessman who left him a lot of property after his death. More than ten years later, the little boy met the woman who once saved him. The woman could no longer recognize the little boy, who had grown into a big middle-aged man. The little boy knelt in front of the woman and called her mother kindly. The woman was surprised. The little boy told his heart. The woman was moved to shed glittering tears. She lifted the little boy up. This story deeply touched my heart. Ten years ago, there was no news from my father who went out to work. My mother brought up our four sisters alone. My mother suffered a lot and shed a lot of tears. These years, our four sisters have been taken care of by many people, and I always remember them in my heart. Now is the golden period of my study. I will study hard and repay those who helped us in the future. (Iv) there are 42 students in our class this year, 18 of whom are left-behind children. Their parents work outside for a long time, and many of the children come back for the Spring Festival every year, after the Spring Festival, they went to the front line of working, while some children’s parents didn’t even come back to visit them for several years. Their hearts lack care, and they need to get the warmth like other children. Children are the support of the family, the hope of the nation and the future of the motherland. As a teacher, it is duty-bound to educate them well. In daily education and teaching, besides imparting book knowledge to them, we should also teach them how to behave and how to be grateful, know how to repay family and society in the future. When I finished my last comment, the street lamp had already given off a slight soft light, and the food in the pot had already become cold. Today, I am totally attracted by these immature words, just like entering a magnificent restaurant. There are ginseng and bird’s nest, but there are also vegetables and turnips. However, whatever is the result of students’ hard work, they should be respected. Hey! I had a different and sumptuous dinner tonight. Guess what it is?

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